Star Struck

Description

“Why are you so good to me…?” I whispered, leaning my head against his chest. He lifted his hand and tilted my chin, looking me in the eyes, his beautiful, bright blue eyes…
“Because you need someone who will be. A man to love you, treat you like a goddess. Grow old with you, have kids with you… I want to be that man Dani. If that means I have to wade through your past shit with you, holding you above it all, so you don’t drown… then I will do it.”

Length

51,418 words

About 171 pages

58 comments on “Star Struck

  • Love love love! !!!!

    Love love love! !!!!

  • on said:
    The formatting takes readers too far out of the story for me to finish.

    The formatting takes readers too far out of the story for me to finish.

  • i love reading this story! Its like im reading fifty shades of grey without the kinky part ;) but i … Read More

    i love reading this story! Its like im reading fifty shades of grey without the kinky part ;) but i gotta say..when i got the the ending,i was like “what the hell! Its finished already?!” I think the ending comes in abrupt..its like you’ve built all the thrill from the nate-lidia part then you leave it all behind.. just saying.. other than that, i love the feels and the romance :)

  • I really enjoyed reading this book. I thought it had great characters, a good plot and an amazing surprising twist … Read More

    I really enjoyed reading this book. I thought it had great characters, a good plot and an amazing surprising twist at the end. You had me convinced it was Nate. I think this book might need a bit of revision, but then what book doesn’t? I thought that the plot might need a little more to it. Other than that I loved everything about it. I just had to give it four hearts because even though I thought the plot could use a bit more, everything else was just so perfect. This is a really great story. I really liked the romance between Dani and Tris, they were so cute! And I absolutely loved how caring and understanding Tris was to Dani and her situation and how he was willing to wait. I need a Tris in my life! Keep up the great work!

  • on said:
    Loved the book. Great for a first time. Has the second been written yet??

    Loved the book. Great for a first time. Has the second been written yet??

    • on said:
      Hi, thanks for reading. No, sorry, the second one hasn't been written yet. I have been really busy with another … Read More

      Hi, thanks for reading. No, sorry, the second one hasn’t been written yet. I have been really busy with another book I got a contract with.
      Hoping to get it done soon, but have realised that this one needs polishing. But if I do that, I lose my rating, so have to leave it up for now. But hopefully, the second one will get done soon.
      And like I said, thanks for reading.

  • Tried to keep reading but just not feeling it. There is way too much tell rather than show. And really … Read More

    Tried to keep reading but just not feeling it. There is way too much tell rather than show. And really bothered by the ellipses. I think you have some solid ideas in here but I think exchanging your work with some writers would help to polish this up! Good luck! Hope it gets polished and published some day.

    • on said:
      Thanks for giving it a go. Always happy to hear from reader.

      Thanks for giving it a go. Always happy to hear from reader.

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