Star Struck

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Dani knew that she was still broken from Nate... but could Tristan show her what love really was? See Full Description

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“Why are you so good to me…?” I whispered, leaning my head against his chest. He lifted his hand and tilted my chin, looking me in the eyes, his beautiful, bright blue eyes…
“Because you need someone who will be. A man to love you, treat you like a goddess. Grow old with you, have kids with you… I want to be that man Dani. If that means I have to wade through your past shit with you, holding you above it all, so you don’t drown… then I will do it.”

Length

51,418 words

About 171 pages

41 comments on “Star Struck

  • Great Job! Good story. Continue where you left the story please.

    • on said:

      Thanks Tina. I’m trying to figure where to start it.
      I think I might have restarted it like fifty times. I am hoping to get it done soon.
      Thanks for your comments.

  • Loved the story, I could not put it down… Great job!!! :-)

    • on said:

      Thank you. Hopefully #2 will be up soon. But am moving… so that sort of takes priority.
      Glad people are enjoying.

  • Read this in one sitting. It was a great read. Story have everything! Looking forward to reading the next book!

    • on said:

      Thank you. I have to get off my butt and do the second one.
      Everyone is asking for it. Might make it a Mother’s Day thing. Sit with a cuppa and type all day. :)

  • Read this non-stop! So good! Excited about the next one! :)

    • on said:

      Thank you. I am trying to get #2 to work properly. Just rying to figure out exactly where to start and finish it.
      So glad that people liked it.

  • Loved the plot and the storyline!

  • Seriously, how cute is this passage!

    “Because you need someone who will be. A man to love you, treat you like a goddess. Grow old with you, have kids with you… I want to be that man Dani. If that means I have to wade through your past shit with you, holding you above it all, so you don’t drown… then I will do it.”

    Absolutely loved this story!

    • on said:

      Thanks. I am proud of this one, seeing as it only took a few days to write. Now to just finish the second one and I will be happy… and have a lot of happy readers too!

  • on said:

    Thank you Xanthia. I didn’t write a prologue, because there is going to be a second one. I am trying to figure out exactly where to start it. I am glad that it made your sick day awesome.
    I know that there are a few typos… (oops) that’s what you get when you are too excited and write something in only five days. He he…
    I am glad that people are loving it and hope that the second one is accepted as much as the first.

  • Ok, So I absolutely loved the plot line. It seemed a little bit like it had Fifty Shades of Grey in its background, but I still enjoyed it. There were some typos, but other than that it was amazing! I think in general you should have written an epilogue for those of us who like to know what happens after the happy ending. I do have to say that I started to tear up at a couple points but this made my sick day awesome!

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