Star Struck

Description

“Why are you so good to me…?” I whispered, leaning my head against his chest. He lifted his hand and tilted my chin, looking me in the eyes, his beautiful, bright blue eyes…
“Because you need someone who will be. A man to love you, treat you like a goddess. Grow old with you, have kids with you… I want to be that man Dani. If that means I have to wade through your past shit with you, holding you above it all, so you don’t drown… then I will do it.”

Length

51,418 words

About 171 pages

54 comments on “Star Struck

  • on said:
    Loved the book. Great for a first time. Has the second been written yet??

    Loved the book. Great for a first time. Has the second been written yet??

    • on said:
      Hi, thanks for reading. No, sorry, the second one hasn't been written yet. I have been really busy with another … Read More

      Hi, thanks for reading. No, sorry, the second one hasn’t been written yet. I have been really busy with another book I got a contract with.
      Hoping to get it done soon, but have realised that this one needs polishing. But if I do that, I lose my rating, so have to leave it up for now. But hopefully, the second one will get done soon.
      And like I said, thanks for reading.

  • Tried to keep reading but just not feeling it. There is way too much tell rather than show. And really … Read More

    Tried to keep reading but just not feeling it. There is way too much tell rather than show. And really bothered by the ellipses. I think you have some solid ideas in here but I think exchanging your work with some writers would help to polish this up! Good luck! Hope it gets polished and published some day.

    • on said:
      Thanks for giving it a go. Always happy to hear from reader.

      Thanks for giving it a go. Always happy to hear from reader.

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