Tips Tuesday: TeenspeakLiz S.
Yesterday I had a great convo with a friend and his 15-year-old daughter. She was telling us about how her English teacher corrects students when they use phrases such as “like,” “sort of,” and “I mean.” I think most of us probably carry over some of that teenspeak – mine are “totally” and “it’s like….” I’ve recently tried very hard to be aware of these words when I’m speaking – easier said than done!
When I read a manuscript full of teenspeak, I make a mental note to edit it all out, 99.9% of the time. New authors, especially, are convinced that littering their dialogue or first-person narrative with teenspeak makes their book more authentic. Um, like, NO. It really doesn’t, 99.9% of the time! In fact, it has the opposite effect, and can feel contrived and a bit desperate.
Of course you want your characters to feel real. But please think about your readers – what feels “real” in written dialogue can feel ponderous to your reading audience.