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Agent 317: Genesis Katarzyna Wu

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Gabriella Torrealba has been trained to diffuse bombs, shoot adversaries from hundreds of yards away, and hack complicatedly protected databases for her job as the youngest-ever secret agent to be hired by the country's defense department. Equipped with her fighting skills and wit, she thinks she can handle anything they'll assign to her, until she finds out she gets assigned to a boarding school with rich, spoiled kids whom she will now be responsible for.

Hilarity and unexpected stuff ensue as she tries to weave her way through drama, academics, and awkward social interactions. Will she be able to survive in her first mission, the only battlefield she has not been trained for?

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  • 53886 words
  • About 216 pages
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13 comments on "Agent 317: Genesis"

Alanya on Oct. 29, 2017, 8:21 a.m. said:

Alanya


Loving it

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Katarzyna Wu on Oct. 29, 2017, 9:46 a.m. said:

Katarzyna Wu


Thank you <3

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Jennifer Bellevue on Oct. 28, 2017, 3:36 p.m. said:

Jennifer Bellevue


I really enjoyed what I have read so far of Agent 317. I like all the diversity, it's so refreshing to read a book where not all the MCs are white.

I enjoyed the dynamic you've set up within the gang. Despite the fact you have such a large cast of main characters, each one had their own different flavor.

One note - I noticed a few problems with your dialogue formatting. Use a new paragraph everytime someone new talks. Even if it is just one sentence.

Looking forward to reading more!

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Katarzyna Wu on Oct. 29, 2017, 5:11 a.m. said:

Katarzyna Wu


Thank you so much for the feedback! Will take this to heart and take care of the formatting next time :)

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Lovina on Oct. 12, 2017, 12:32 a.m. said:

Lovina


I love this so far :)

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Katarzyna Wu on Oct. 13, 2017, 2:23 a.m. said:

Katarzyna Wu


<3 thank you! :3

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Kaelibell on Oct. 8, 2017, 3:41 p.m. said:

Kaelibell


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Kaelibell on Oct. 8, 2017, 3:37 p.m. said:

Kaelibell


I somewhat short but I loved it. Well thought out and descriptive.
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Kaelibell on Oct. 4, 2017, 4:17 a.m. said:

Kaelibell


This story is good so far very descriptive.

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Cassie Rose on Sept. 28, 2017, 4:36 p.m. said:

Cassie Rose


I like the cute and humorous tone of this book. I love teen spies, especially when they are stuck having to still do normal teen things like go to school. I think it was cute that Gaby was so competent in her spy skills, but was socially awkward! My suggestion for improvement would be cutting some of the mundane things (like straightening files or actions of that nature) and also to be careful of using passive words in your writing (was, started to, began to, etc). These slow down the pace of the book and make it harder to feel immersed. But they are thankfully easy fixes! :) Similar books would be perhaps the Alex Rider series.

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