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Breathing Underwater


Before Dorian and Lian, Michelle understood her life. There's her best friend Teddy, who knows her better than anyone else. Her mom, who Michelle has worried about more than anything since her dad died last year.
They live in a small Michigan town that Michelle is just waiting to leave. Until Dorian moves there. Magical, funny, freckled, sweet Dorian. Michelle instantly likes him. Just like she immediately likes Lian when she meets her. But she learns that people- and relationships- are far more complicated than she could ever imagine. And that the most important relationship in your life is the one you have with yourself.


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