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Chasing The Orion Stars (Venators of Orion #1) L.H. Nicole

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Aurora Milos has fallen in love with a sixteenth century boy in her dreams of all places. When her mom moves them to Rome, Italy she’ll not only discover Alexander "Lex" Borgia is real, but that he’s found a way to defy time and to be with her in the twenty-first century—just as he vowed he would.

The only problem is that keeping that vow will drive Aurora and Lex into the center of an ancient war between the Venators of Orion, the immortal army that protect our world, the mysterious and unseen phantom beasts that roam the earth, and those who use those monsters to get their revenge.

Aurora’s new life may have everything she’s ever wanted, but it's not what she thought it would be; and if she and Lex fail to stop the evil Pleiades sisters and their followers the modern world will never be the same.

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  • 89491 words
  • About 358 pages
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Swoon Index Ranking

  • Heat

    7

  • Tears

    2

  • Laughs

    7

  • Thrills

    9

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4 comments on "Chasing The Orion Stars (Venators of Orion #1)"

♠♣♦Alice♣♦♠ on June 9, 2017, 5:05 p.m. said:

♠♣♦Alice♣♦♠


Honestly I loved pretty much everything about it. Their dreams were really enjoyable to read. I liked how the story played out although, I do feel a bit bad for Luca; I was hoping to see Juliet and Luca ending up together. However, it was still a very satisfying ending. Although I do have a question.. "Why Karen?!" Karen's death almost made me cry even if she was only included for a bit. The also included mythological stories and encounters were also very fascinating. This manuscript definitely needs a sequel. I MUST know about the tall familiar boy at the ending and how they'll manage to bring peace. I hope to read more manuscripts from you later on.

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L.H. Nicole on June 21, 2017, 6:23 p.m. said:

L.H. Nicole


Thanks for the great comments and I am working on the second book now :)
<3 always LH

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jkwise1 on May 15, 2017, 2:57 p.m. said:

jkwise1


I love the premise and the setting, but the tense shifts in the first chapter make it tough to get into. It feels a little like the main character is speaking to the reader instead of living in her own head also.

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Steve on May 1, 2017, 7:48 p.m. said:

Steve


It is great and getting exciting

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