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Dangerous Play Alison Miller

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Best friends and soccer all-stars Jesse, Ashton, and JD are on opposite sides of a prank text that leaves Jesse girlfriend-less and spirals into a vicious social war. Their friendship teeters on a misunderstanding and secrets they’ve been downplaying—Jesse’s temptation to cheat for a classmate, JD’s sexual identity, and Ashton’s harbored feelings for Jesse’s girl—look to blow wide open. When a common rival pits them against each other, threatening to destroy their friendship and futures, they must take him down—together.

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  • 77356 words
  • About 309 pages
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Swoon Index Ranking

  • Heat

    9

  • Tears

    7

  • Laughs

    10

  • Thrills

    9

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73 comments on "Dangerous Play"

Ray616 on June 23, 2017, 7:40 p.m. said:

Ray616


I love being able to read through all the characters thoughts. Getting to know all the characters on a personal level makes the story so relateable to a wide variety of audiences. Everyone can find someone with whom to relate.

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Read4me! on June 21, 2017, 3:42 p.m. said:

Read4me!


So far so good!

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Alison Miller on June 21, 2017, 10:38 p.m. said:

Alison Miller


Thank you for reading! Glad you like it so far!

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HCReardon on June 19, 2017, 9:47 p.m. said:

HCReardon


good descriptions, great dialogue

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Alison Miller on June 21, 2017, 11:01 a.m. said:

Alison Miller


Thank you for your kind comments! I'm glad you liked the dialogue! And thank you so much for reading!

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Ryan.Hylton on June 18, 2017, 6:31 p.m. said:

Ryan.Hylton


Having multiple characters narrate the story instantly grasped my attention and made me connected and rooted in each of the characters. The plot is a great and it has pieces that most people could relate to in some way. The humor, tone, and character development made this a very enjoyable read that was hard to put down (I finished in 2 days)! JD is definitely my favorite character, I think Mrs. Miller did a great job developing this character as well as the others on so many levels! I can not wait to see this book on the shelves! :)

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Alison Miller on June 19, 2017, 6:51 p.m. said:

Alison Miller


Thank you SO MUCH!!! For reading. For leaving these kind comments. I am SO glad you enjoyed it and that you found it humorous and interesting! Thank you for reading and for taking the time to give me this insightful feedback!

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Karen.Curran on June 18, 2017, 9:23 a.m. said:

Karen.Curran


Nope I really enjoyed it

I can't think of one?

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Alison Miller on June 19, 2017, 6:49 p.m. said:

Alison Miller


Thank you so much for reading!

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bridgidgallagher on June 17, 2017, 10:22 a.m. said:

bridgidgallagher


Wow. This is such an amazing story. I couldn't stop reading! Fantastic characters. Amazing voice for each one. A plot that kept me turning pages. And maybe I cried a little. :)

This was so, so good!!

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