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Dangerous Play Alison Miller

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Best friends and soccer all-stars Jesse, Ashton, and JD are on opposite sides of a prank text that leaves Jesse girlfriend-less and spirals into a vicious social war. Their friendship teeters on a misunderstanding and secrets they’ve been downplaying—Jesse’s temptation to cheat for a classmate, JD’s sexual identity, and Ashton’s harbored feelings for Jesse’s girl—look to blow wide open. When a common rival pits them against each other, threatening to destroy their friendship and futures, they must take him down—together.

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  • 77356 words
  • About 309 pages
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Swoon Index Ranking

  • Heat

    9

  • Tears

    7

  • Laughs

    9

  • Thrills

    9

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117 comments on "Dangerous Play"

essienina on Aug. 22, 2017, 9:04 a.m. said:

essienina


I really loved all the characters and felt that I got to know all the boys! There were a few scenes in which the wrong person name was used so this may need to be fixed in further editing.

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clairebear99 on Aug. 13, 2017, 12:16 a.m. said:

clairebear99


NONE!!!

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Alison Miller on Aug. 13, 2017, 9:58 p.m. said:

Alison Miller


Thank you for reading!

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clairebear99 on Aug. 12, 2017, 9:26 p.m. said:

clairebear99


Love the plot so far and how it switches POV so you get multiple sides to the story. I just get confused on who's who and their problems!

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Alison Miller on Aug. 13, 2017, 9:57 p.m. said:

Alison Miller


Thank you so much for these comments and for reading my story! I'm glad you're enjoying it!

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nicmccarty on July 26, 2017, 1:50 p.m. said:

nicmccarty


I loved this book! I think it's absolutely fantastic. The characters are real and honest. It's refreshing to read about friendships from a male perspective.

Similar Stories : Similar to "The Sisterhood of the Traveling Pants" in that this book explores long friendships that fall apart and come together. Explores how individuals sometimes need avenues to explore life on their own but how they are much stronger because of those they surround themselves with.

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Alison Miller on July 27, 2017, 9:17 p.m. said:

Alison Miller


This review made my day! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for reading!

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nicmccarty on July 18, 2017, 8:18 p.m. said:

nicmccarty


Loving this premise. Anticipating some very real challenges for these three. Great dialogue and very interesting to read about male friendships.

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Alison Miller on July 19, 2017, 8:59 p.m. said:

Alison Miller


I'm so glad you like the premise! Thank you so much for reading!

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MelisRiz on July 18, 2017, 5:59 p.m. said:

MelisRiz


Great book to read, fast paced and not easy to put down! Loved that it was from a boys perspective.

Similar Stories : I do not normally read young adult books so I do not know what to compare it to. It was excellent!

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