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First Down to Love Rebecca Leigh

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Milo Aikens is a journalist first and foremost. She does not care who she offends with her words because, as far as she is concerned, she speaks the truth. Drew Prentice is the quarterback of the football team who is not, repeat not, looking for a relationship of any kind. He likes to screw around and enjoy his life while he still can.

When Milo is assigned to a football article because the regular writer is out of town, Drew is unhappy about the too honest Milo Aikens writing the article about his football game. When her article comes out and she rips apart his team and his leadership, Drew is determined to get her back...by joining the school paper. The advisor of the paper assigns them to a...a dating column?!

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  • 49264 words
  • About 197 pages
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Swoon Index Ranking

  • Heat

    7

  • Tears

    3

  • Laughs

    6

  • Thrills

    4

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60 comments on "First Down to Love"

Renee on Nov. 19, 2017, 5:38 a.m. said:

Renee


It never quite got there.

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Isla on Nov. 5, 2017, 10:51 p.m. said:

Isla


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November on Oct. 30, 2017, 8:32 a.m. said:

November


All I Need Is You, Baby

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The Book Junkie Reads . . . on Sept. 27, 2017, 5:59 p.m. said:

The Book Junkie Reads . . .


I got slowed down with my reading because of having to step back a few paragraphs and start again. Then the various typos made it a bit difficult without restarting some sentences. I thought this was a cute little story with a small second chance attached to it.

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Gg908 on Aug. 11, 2017, 9:37 a.m. said:

Gg908


😀

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Shannnxoxo on July 21, 2017, 1:23 a.m. said:

Shannnxoxo


If I were publishing, I would change Milo's name, and get rid of most outfit descriptions; it doesn't matter what anyone is wearing unless it is relative to the plot of the story, and on another note, fashion changes over time, and you want the store to remain relatable to the reader.

The story was a little predictable, but I enjoyed it.

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Emily Hollman on June 17, 2017, 5:02 p.m. said:

Emily Hollman


I liked the story line, but at some parts this story was hard to understand because of all the typos. Also, I liked Milo's character, but Drew seemed a bit shallow and hard to relate to.

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Emily Hollman on June 17, 2017, 2:02 p.m. said:

Emily Hollman


There are some spelling errors, but otherwise it's a good story.

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C.J Albert on June 17, 2017, 1:18 p.m. said:

C.J Albert


It was a great read. I love how the family was mentioned throughout it because in some stories the families of the main characters seem to just disappear, however I think, personally, that Drew and Milo fell in love a bit to quick and I didn't really feel the connection between them. It would be great if more of the dates they went on were mentioned, as well. Overall, I enjoyed reading it and wouldn't really change any major details, just add some to establish the connection between them and the journey they went on to fall in love.

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ShawMcKnight on May 18, 2017, 6:30 p.m. said:

ShawMcKnight


This story left me split right down the middle. I loved Milo but felt Drew's character was left unfinished. The concept for this story was great. milo's family was fun and interesting but drew's family had huge holes in it. If his dad is a problem in his life I want to actually feel it, see it, and be personally invested in it. The story was 50/50 for me. The milo side amazing and the drew side empty.

With everything said and done, I think this story could stand apart from others. It just needs some more depth. Some boyfriend improvements and it could be really good.

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