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Hello Goodbye Rachel Schieffelbein

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Mya has a plan. Give the baby up for adoption, finish high school and college, marry Michael, and then have kids. But a pregnancy complication lands Mya at a hospital half a country away from home and changes everything.

She moves in with her aunt and uncle and their kids, including Jane, Myaโ€™s self-absorbed sixteen-year-old cousin. Living in tight quarters, with tense small talk and unspoken judgments, Mya and Jane struggle to find common ground.

Feeling all alone, Mya longs for home and for Michael. But as her baby grows, so does her love for it, and what sheโ€™d thought was a clear choice becomes fuzzy. Keeping the baby could mean losing Michael, and Mya isnโ€™t sure she can handle her own life without him much less the life of another.

How can she choose between the boy she loves and the baby their love created?

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  • 69783 words
  • About 279 pages
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Swoon Index Ranking

  • Heat

    3

  • Tears

    8

  • Laughs

    7

  • Thrills

    6

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27 comments on "Hello Goodbye"

Rachel Schieffelbein on Feb. 14, 2017, 1:22 p.m. said:

Rachel Schieffelbein


Thank you!! This made my day. :)

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1Anna23 on Jan. 6, 2017, 11:05 p.m. said:

1Anna23


I really loved this book. I particularly loved how you could watch the characters grow through the story. I couldn't put my laptop down and I just freaked out when it crashed, thinking there wasn't any bookmark! At first I was mad at Jane and Mya for the way they let Harper and Michael walk all over them, but it was very gratifying to watch them grow. I loved it :)

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Rachel Schieffelbein on Jan. 7, 2017, 7:43 a.m. said:

Rachel Schieffelbein


Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! ๐Ÿ˜Š

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QueendSheena on Jan. 5, 2017, 9:14 p.m. said:

QueendSheena


I am enjoying this so far. There are a few word selections that need tweaking and some double telling. But aside from that I feel these characters are in real situations and the emotions are heart felt at time. A nice read and I'll be back to continue this story.

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Tracy on Dec. 5, 2016, 8:01 p.m. said:

Tracy


It's interesting and generally well written. I'd like the characters to have more depth but overall, I'm willing to read more.

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Rachel Schieffelbein on Dec. 7, 2016, 9:35 a.m. said:

Rachel Schieffelbein


Thank you! Feedback is always appreciated. :)

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Reader on Nov. 28, 2016, 9:26 p.m. said:

Reader


I loved it! Fantastic writing, you definitely have a new fan!

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Rachel Schieffelbein on Nov. 28, 2016, 10:13 p.m. said:

Rachel Schieffelbein


You're so sweet! Thank you so much! ๐Ÿ’—

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Enajite on Nov. 17, 2016, 4:04 p.m. said:

Enajite


I love the characters. The book is intriguing ๐Ÿ‘

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Rachel Schieffelbein on Nov. 28, 2016, 4:21 p.m. said:

Rachel Schieffelbein


Thank you! ๐Ÿ’—

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