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Meet Aurora Winters, a perky, innocent, seventeen-year-old loner.
Meet Jeremiah Summers, an ever angry, anti-social, eighteen-year-old loner.
What happens when their paths cross? Will "Sleeping Beauty" find her happily ever after?
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Jasmine on Dec. 20, 2017, 8:02 a.m. said:
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Lost In A Book on Nov. 30, 2017, 12:56 p.m. said:
I enjoyed the story premise and the unique characters. I felt however that the sentence structure and grammar needs fixing in several chapters. Also, the first time Aurora and Jer interact she says he is hot but you don’t describe him besides a nose ring. More details to enrich the setting and characters would be helpful.
E.Ariel on Nov. 28, 2017, 6:28 p.m. said:
I loved it!
Lalajonn1379 on Nov. 24, 2017, 10:59 p.m. said:
It was so cute and I loved it so much
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IDKseeya on Nov. 12, 2017, 4:35 a.m. said:
I loved how in the beginning aroura and jer were like frenemies but then they warmed up to each other. and how aroura looked passed all of his flaws. I don't think that there could be any way to improve this book.
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IDKseeya on Nov. 12, 2017, 3:08 a.m. said:
I love how you put in details. You are just overall a great writer and I would totally buy this book.
I would not compare this book to any other one because each book is different and great in their own ways there is no point in comparing them.
Intellectual_idiots on Nov. 8, 2017, 9:07 p.m. said:
Liked it, very cute.
Intellectual_idiots on Nov. 8, 2017, 9:06 p.m. said:
It was cute but it had quite a few mistakes. (Good for people that like a cliche)
bremcfarland on Nov. 6, 2017, 4:42 p.m. said:
Jennifer Bellevue on Oct. 29, 2017, 7:23 a.m. said:
I didn't have time today to get through the whole novel but I wanted to write a quick note to let you know what I think so far.
I love how Aurora seems like the stereotypical Disney princess but you've thrown her into the real world. I think it's interesting to see how someone with such a sweet and sunny disposition would fare in the real world. The happy song had me smiling straight away.
I like the tension you've created so far between Aurora and Simran and Aurora and Jer. The tension there kept me hooked.
In your next pass over His Princess maybe focus in on grammar and dialogue formatting. There are some good things out there online that help. I know I've had to use them a lot!