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On Our Way Gabrielle Deppe

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Adrian Fletcher is an American with a visa working in London. He loves the city, he loves the people and he especially loves his job. What else does he love? That cute guy with the blue eyes he sees every morning on the tube to work. All Adrian can do is stare and hope that he doesn't get caught.

Arthur Gatiss has lived all his life in London. He barely notices the handsome guy with the hazel eyes across him as he is too busy trying to safe his relationship with his girlfriend.

Until their paths cross at a party at Adrian's home.

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  • 80103 words
  • About 320 pages
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10 comments on "On Our Way"

caralin on March 20, 2017, 1:34 p.m. said:

caralin


This got off to a bit of a slow start, but I'm beginning to enjoy it. Throughout the first chapter I was more annoyed with Adrian than anything and I thought I wouldn't continue reading this past the third chapter, but the first conversation between Adrian and Arthur left just enough intrigue for me to keep reading no matter what. This is a cute start, I'm just hoping to see the plot pick up a bit more quickly as this goes on.

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Karah Rachelle on Jan. 31, 2017, 6:26 p.m. said:

Karah Rachelle


Everything was a little long for my taste: the chapters, paragraphs, and dialogue. Consider changing up the length, so that when you look at the page, as a whole, the structure is a bit varied. Try having characters say less then they'd like to or make it a bit punchier. I think it would help the pacing of the book. But of course, this is my preference. Take it as you will. Overall, I really liked it. Good job!

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Gabrielle Deppe on Feb. 2, 2017, 8:24 a.m. said:

Gabrielle Deppe


Thank you for reading and giving me the tips, Karah!

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A.J. on Dec. 28, 2016, 4:15 p.m. said:

A.J.


Cute romance. I liked conflict that broke them up, and how they got back together.

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Gabrielle Deppe on Jan. 11, 2017, 5:54 p.m. said:

Gabrielle Deppe


Thank you so much, A.J.!

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A.J. on Dec. 28, 2016, 2:57 p.m. said:

A.J.


Very cute!

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Roxlina on Nov. 3, 2016, 1:24 a.m. said:

Roxlina


Loved the back and forth between both characters. Both Logan and Connor were great supportive characters. I ugly cried a lot in the middle of the novel, thanks a lot. The epilogue felt a little rushed but it's a lot to fit in to that timeline. Loved it anyways!! Great read!

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Gabrielle Deppe on Nov. 3, 2016, 3:22 p.m. said:

Gabrielle Deppe


Thank you for your comment. I can understand that the epilogue might feel rushed. There was indeed a lot that happened in small snippets over a period of a couple of months. I will look into that to see if I can maybe change it sometime to make it feel less rushed.

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Nessa on Oct. 31, 2016, 3:55 p.m. said:

Nessa


At first, I really loved the story. Stephen is without a doubt my favorite character in the whole book and my heart just ache so much for him. It was slow burner love story, but it was okay with all the things that happened to Adrian in the past, but the thing that started to make me less enjoy the books was all the things that kept happening between the two MCs (especially to Adrian) like it was destiny for them so just be hot and cold all the time. I did not enjoy the main plot twist, seems like it did not stick well where I thought the book was going, just didn't seem realistic enough for me. Also, the end is not really an ending, I would've be happy with or without an HEA ending but its seemed rush to me and there is still lot of questions in my head that did'nt got an answer and again it did not fit well with the rest of the story. I think this book have a lot a great things in it to be a wonderful YA love story with it's angst and everything but there is just too much happening for me to believe it and I just lost interest about 3/4 of the book.

Sorry first time leaving a review, not very good at it !

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Gabrielle Deppe on Nov. 1, 2016, 8:59 a.m. said:

Gabrielle Deppe


Thank you! I appreciate you being honest about your opinion and I will definitely take a look into the tips and improvements you suggested, so really thank you lots. :)

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