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Something New Andrea Murray

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Seventeen-year-old Ria Gabriel always maintains control. Her life is predictable and organized, just the way she likes it, but receiving a gift from a mysterious stranger turns her life into a living nightmare.

Her once orderly days plunge into chaos when she begins to see haunting blue eyes in her mirror and hear a voice pleading for her help. Ria is hunted by visions of a girl, begging for release from her tormented past, but the more she sees, the more she questions the spirit’s real motivation as the vengeful apparition reaches into Ria’s very reality.

As her life explodes, she doesn’t know how to appease the spirit, and the more she denies the ghostly girl, the more the girl’s torture becomes Ria’s own.

Ria must unravel the mystery of her spirit girl’s tainted past before Ria herself joins her.

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  • 62809 words
  • About 251 pages
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Swoon Index Ranking

  • Heat

  • Tears

    6

  • Laughs

    7

  • Thrills

    10

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16 comments on "Something New"

Beckathecat on Aug. 20, 2017, 1:20 a.m. said:

Beckathecat


I like the suspense. It has that on the edge of your seat feel, and makes you the sluthe in this paranormal "who-done-it"ish, tale.

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Andrea Murray on Aug. 20, 2017, 6:40 p.m. said:

Andrea Murray


Thank you for the rating, Beckathecat! And thanks for taking the time to comment!

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Beckathecat on Aug. 18, 2017, 7:40 p.m. said:

Beckathecat


I love the story so far. I am on pins and needles wanting to know if the old lady is a witch, vampire or what! Can't wait to read more.

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Andrea Murray on Aug. 19, 2017, 4:10 p.m. said:

Andrea Murray


Thanks for leaving the comment! I hope you like it, and you're right to assume things aren't what they seem. You'll see the old lady again...

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Susanth65 on Aug. 14, 2017, 11:33 p.m. said:

Susanth65


It's got me hooked I want to read more already

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Andrea Murray on Aug. 19, 2017, 4:11 p.m. said:

Andrea Murray


YAY! I'm so glad, but even if you don't like it, please leave me feedback. I always try to learn something from every reader, and I love to hear comments, good or not. Happy reading!

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Kaylayoung10 on Aug. 14, 2017, 7:35 p.m. said:

Kaylayoung10


I think the book is really good so far I normally don't read but now I can't stop reading.

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Andrea Murray on Aug. 19, 2017, 4:12 p.m. said:

Andrea Murray


Hope you like it, Kayla!

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MJ on Aug. 6, 2017, 6:25 p.m. said:

MJ


It is very suspenseful. I like the characters, and the plot moves along at a good pace. For someone who denies being a writer, this author handles the craft pretty well! Good job, Andrea.

Similar Stories : I don't usually read this genre.

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MJ on Aug. 6, 2017, 6:08 p.m. said:

MJ


I liked the suspense. It moved along well, and kept me wanting to read more.

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