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Star Struck

jessica

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"Why are you so good to me...?" I whispered, leaning my head against his chest. He lifted his hand and tilted my chin, looking me in the eyes, his beautiful, bright blue eyes...
"Because you need someone who will be. A man to love you, treat you like a goddess. Grow old with you, have kids with you... I want to be that man Dani. If that means I have to wade through your past shit with you, holding you above it all, so you don't drown... then I will do it."

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  • About 221 pages
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Swoon Index Ranking

  • Heat

    8

  • Tears

    6

  • Laughs

    5

  • Thrills

    8

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64 comments on "Star Struck"

Waiaria Faneva on May 2, 2016, 9:48 a.m. said:

Waiaria Faneva


Love it!

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mariamlovesbooks on April 29, 2016, 7:57 p.m. said:

mariamlovesbooks


I loved the ending!!

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jessica on April 4, 2016, 2:35 a.m. said:

jessica


Thanks everyone.
I have only just got notifications for this, so didn't realise people were reading it still.
I haven't touched this for a while, as I have been busy with book contracts.
😊
If anyone wants to try something else of mine, I am published on Amazon under J.J.Stanley. I have 3 works out and more to come. 😊
Thanks again.

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Mely Ayala on Feb. 29, 2016, 7:11 p.m. said:

Mely Ayala


I liked everything !!!!! I would've loved to read more about what happened with Dani and Tristan... The wedding,etc... Just more!!! I read it in two days,LOL

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Celinda Labrousse on Nov. 21, 2015, 7:30 p.m. said:

Celinda Labrousse


There are a few typos, but nothing major. Never got torn from the story, just not my person favorite.

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Celinda Labrousse on Nov. 21, 2015, 7:29 p.m. said:

Celinda Labrousse


Good work. It read easy. Just not my kind of story. It is well written enough to find an audience. :)

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sakurapink on Nov. 4, 2015, 5:38 a.m. said:

sakurapink


I can't stop reading it for the world. It's like a race wherein you can't stop in the middle and know you HAVE to finish it without pause.

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Safia Shakil on Sept. 19, 2015, 8:29 p.m. said:

Safia Shakil


What did you like about the story? Any suggestions on how the writer could improve it?

cool

What popular book or story would you compare it to?

none

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Safia Shakil on Sept. 19, 2015, 11:57 a.m. said:

Safia Shakil


What do you like so far? Any suggestions on how the writer could improve the story?

I like it and I think its good but I think the author can spice up the relationship a bit

What popular book or story would you compare it to?

None that I can think of

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Emily Nix on Aug. 5, 2015, 1:10 a.m. said:

Emily Nix


Love love love! !!!!

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jessica on Nov. 28, 2013, 6:59 a.m. said:

jessica


Has some sex scenes in it, but not too graphic. (not 50 Shades.)

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Cheree Gardiner on Nov. 30, 2013, 6:29 a.m. said:

Cheree Gardiner


I loved it, couldn't put it down was so caught up in it. Next one please

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Jenny Bagg on Nov. 30, 2013, 6:34 a.m. said:

Jenny Bagg


Well done Jess

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Vicki Bagg on Nov. 30, 2013, 6:41 a.m. said:

Vicki Bagg


Loved it. More please

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jessica on Nov. 30, 2013, 7:18 a.m. said:

jessica


Thankyou! I am working on #2 at the moment.

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Rachel Carstairs on Dec. 22, 2013, 5:17 p.m. said:

Rachel Carstairs


Two questions. 1) What's it called? 2) When is it coming out!?!?!?!?!? Side-note: I honestly LOVED the first one!

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michael stanley on Dec. 1, 2013, 3:33 a.m. said:

michael stanley


This is a thrilling, sexy story. With lead characters that are engaging and sexy. Worth the read.

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lynette on Dec. 2, 2013, 9:54 a.m. said:

lynette


Wow... is all I can say. This is good. I like how Tristan wants to be Dani's knight in shining armour and she wants to know why. Very well developed, emotional characters. Love it. Can't wait for part 2. See if Nate comes back into it, if he causes problems. Would like to see Bridget in it again too.

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Emma Byrnes on Dec. 17, 2013, 10:54 p.m. said:

Emma Byrnes


Grest story Jess. I'm ready for more

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jessica on Dec. 22, 2013, 6:56 p.m. said:

jessica


Rachel Herondale.
Thank-you, I haven't got a working title for the next book yet. I am trying to figure out what will work with the first title.
I am about half way through the second book, it is trying to make it all work, without contradicting the first one.
I am glad that you like the book. I had a friend that was late for work twice because she couldn't put it down.
Thankyou for your feedback. Makes it worth writing in the end. I will be posting it here when done, so you should be able to find it.

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