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The Sum of Something More cardhouseqt13

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Sophie has always known she would fall in love. She dreamed of high school love and of finding the one. The one that would be the summation of her dreams. But what do you do when you fall hard and have trouble summing up the pieces of your life all over again?

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  • 88160 words
  • About 353 pages
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4 comments on "The Sum of Something More"

nonfictionsim on May 13, 2018, 3:46 p.m. said:

nonfictionsim


I like the book so far! I'm not sure of its direction yet, but I'm only at chapter three! The issue so far is that there are forming issues with the dialogue & some grammar. (I'm not sure if this is a side effect from uploading to Swoon or not.)

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cardhouseqt13 on May 14, 2018, 10:30 a.m. said:

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Thanks! Yeah I am not sure if the format wasn't right when I uploaded it. Because I went over it multiple times and I had a few people proofread it for me. But thanks for your feedback!

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theequotex on April 21, 2018, 4:15 a.m. said:

theequotex


DNF. I liked the concept of this story but didn't get far.
The dialogue between characters feels stiff and unrealistic. Real teenagers, or people in general, don't speak like that so it felt scripted and bland when characters conversed.
It was also confusing reading this because of the random switches in character POVs. Maybe if characters had their own chapter for their POV it would've been easier to follow and more interesting.
The general plotline for the story seemed realistic, as did the main characters themselves. But, since I didn't get far in this book I can't say much.

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Panaromax.Prisoner on April 18, 2018, 11:46 a.m. said:

Panaromax.Prisoner


Amazing plotline,but some small grammar mistakes throughout this book, but it's still excellent to read! :)

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