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The Tower Fall Maykathryn

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After an uncomfortable and frightening encounter with magic at age ten, Reese Parks skirts carefully around the Witch population. It takes a deck of Tarot cards in a townie bar to light the charge of electric magic sitting dormant inside her. With the seductive interest of Ryan Hayes urging her on, and the support of local Witch Quinn Huxley, Reese finds a whole world opening up to her for discovery.

But when another young Witch goes missing frissons of tension are exposed in Three Corners. Rivals are revealed to be enemies and Reese has to navigate the fractures in her dorm suite relationships while trying to untangle herself from the threads of the mystery.

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  • 88534 words
  • About 354 pages
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Swoon Index Ranking

  • Heat

    7

  • Tears

    4

  • Laughs

    7

  • Thrills

    9

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109 comments on "The Tower Fall"

Maple Twiggs on Sept. 13, 2017, 1:30 p.m. said:

Maple Twiggs


Loved the main character Reese and how closely we followed her story and her thoughts. Also - I like quirky, humorous books and this sort of had hints of that. There was darkness too, but not so much that I had to stop reading. Enough to make the narrative intriguing without being soulcrushing and depressing. There were a couple loose ends, but I felt they were there for a sequel so I wasn't frustrated by them. I definitely recommend this to any fan of YA fantasy!

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Zephrbabe on Sept. 8, 2017, 3:35 p.m. said:

Zephrbabe


Omfg the world-building is to die for.

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Maykathryn on Sept. 8, 2017, 10:28 p.m. said:

Maykathryn


YAY!! Thank you! <3<3<3

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Maple Twiggs on Aug. 22, 2017, 12:24 p.m. said:

Maple Twiggs


I am enjoying this so far and I look forward to reading more. I'm definitely interested in learning more about how magic works in this world, the different types of magic, and why Riley doesn't like witches so much. Also intrigued by why they kept calling Reese a Nyxie (sp? - I can't spell sometimes, haha). Fun story so far - thanks for posting it on here!

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Maykathryn on Sept. 8, 2017, 10:28 p.m. said:

Maykathryn


Thank you so much!! Glad you've enjoyed it so far! <3

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kaykosk on July 25, 2017, 6:19 a.m. said:

kaykosk


Amazing! Would definitely read the sequels if they get written!

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Maykathryn on July 28, 2017, 9:04 a.m. said:

Maykathryn


thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. <3

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kaykosk on July 25, 2017, 3:52 a.m. said:

kaykosk


I really like it! Interesting world-building, will definitely continue reading :)

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Samantha Hastings on July 4, 2017, 8:48 p.m. said:

Samantha Hastings


I didn't suspect Jarvis until the very end, so great plotting! Reece was a strong character that I couldn't help but like. I really liked the reconciliation with Riley. "I wish I knew" change to "I wish I'd known." About Riley's Mom. Loved Quinn, George, and Evan. I thought somehow that Evan's brother who left with the gypsies would come back into play.

Some things I'd change:
Don't mention the Catholic Church by name, just say Riley is very religious. Oddly enough I wanted Reece to end up with Evan. That would explain his overreacting around her. Also, I just don't think it works with Ryan because she innately doesn't trust him or think it will last.

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Maykathryn on July 5, 2017, 9:23 a.m. said:

Maykathryn


I am so glad you enjoyed the story!! Thank you very much for all of your notes, too. I appreciate them! <3

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