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The Tower Fall Maykathryn

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After an uncomfortable and frightening encounter with magic at age ten, Reese Parks skirts carefully around the Witch population. It takes a deck of Tarot cards in a townie bar to light the charge of electric magic sitting dormant inside her. With the seductive interest of Ryan Hayes urging her on, and the support of local Witch Quinn Huxley, Reese finds a whole world opening up to her for discovery.

But when another young Witch goes missing frissons of tension are exposed in Three Corners. Rivals are revealed to be enemies and Reese has to navigate the fractures in her dorm suite relationships while trying to untangle herself from the threads of the mystery.

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  • 88534 words
  • About 354 pages
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  • Heat

    6

  • Tears

    4

  • Laughs

    7

  • Thrills

    9

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88 comments on "The Tower Fall"

Jen on April 14, 2017, 9:44 a.m. said:

Jen


Absolutely amazing story!

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Maykathryn on April 14, 2017, 5:58 p.m. said:

Maykathryn


Thank you! This made my day!!

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RB Frank on April 6, 2017, 10:57 p.m. said:

RB Frank


This was a well rounded story. You did a great job with the setting. The environments and places were believable. It was almost as if it was a rea life alternate existence. Like if I passed through the mist in the woods, I would stumble upon one of their ceremonies. The only suggestions I could make would be to consider if you needed all the characters. There were quite a few. I felt you may have been able to combine or eliminate some. The other suggestion might be to highlight Jarvis' character a bit more. I had trouble remembering who he was at the reveal. And Pyewackets - by any chance, was that a nod to Bell Book & Candle? Good work overall and good luck.

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Maykathryn on April 9, 2017, 11:17 a.m. said:

Maykathryn


Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it! And I really appreciate that feedback, I will make a note to look at those characters.

And yeah, Bell Book & Candle has been a favorite of mine since I was little. I love Jimmy Stewart!

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Ginevra King on April 4, 2017, 5:58 p.m. said:

Ginevra King


An overall pleasant read. I liked the witches and the magic.

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Maykathryn on April 5, 2017, 10:14 a.m. said:

Maykathryn


Thanks so much!

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CNK on April 1, 2017, 8:42 p.m. said:

CNK


I loved the characters! Very well developed. The author's descriptions of the feeling of magic made me feel it!

Twilight

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Maykathryn on April 2, 2017, 5:14 p.m. said:

Maykathryn


Thank you!! I really appreciate that. Glad you enjoyed it!

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Megan Gaudino on March 24, 2017, 7:50 a.m. said:

Megan Gaudino


I think you've done a really good job of creating a sense of place! I love the atmosphere.

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Maykathryn on March 24, 2017, 3:32 p.m. said:

Maykathryn


Thank you so much!!

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