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Thirty Minutes Under


One girl. One pool party. One fall.

Lory's life is changed forever when she drowns for thirty minutes at a pool party. She's dead for thirty minutes, but when she wakes up, nothing extreme is wrong with her. Then, when and is forced to control fire and fight with the popular girl, Mackenzie Steelburg, she realizes that thirty minutes might've just changed her life forever.

But now she doesn't know who to trust.
That's where Peter comes in.


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  • About 62 pages
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