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When My Shift Ends Brittany Ingo

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When cynical former beauty pageant queen, Ellie Wilde, hears of her grandmother's sickness, she's the first to offer to drive her to her chemotherapy. What she didn't know she was agreeing to was an obnoxiously cheerful blond boy somehow nudging his way into her life.

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  • 53675 words
  • About 215 pages
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  • Heat

    8

  • Tears

    10

  • Laughs

    9

  • Thrills

    8

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109 comments on "When My Shift Ends"

Bella on April 28, 2017, 1:02 p.m. said:

Bella


I enjoyed this book, I really did. The only thing that I think could make it better would be to have the entire book be from Cooper's point of view rather than Ellie's. Don't get me wrong, I loved reading Ellie's, but it makes more sense with the ending. I don't want to get too into it for fear of spoilers, but I think it would simply make more sense. Great job and a great read!

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XmariemilyX on April 25, 2017, 11:28 a.m. said:

XmariemilyX


I absolutely loved the realistic approach the author took in portraying illness, love and loss. As for improvement, I don'y there there is room or need for it. A wonderful read, thank you Brittany.

I don't think I would be able to compare it to any other books. The story is unique and not cliché at all, has an amazing plot, a touching twist and a lot of humour. I don't think any of the books I've read could ever come close to the masterpiece that is this book.

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spontaneity on April 22, 2017, 10:52 a.m. said:

spontaneity


It was a really good read as the characters were very realistic and likeable. The ending was also great - unexpected and I liked it as I think it made the book better because it wasn't predictable yet it wasn't completely happy as that would have been too unrealistic.

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Kileyxo on April 22, 2017, 3:03 a.m. said:

Kileyxo


Everything. This book is amazing.

Similar Stories : The fault in our stars

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the_skye on April 21, 2017, 11:21 p.m. said:

the_skye


I loved how real the storyline was, and how it played with your emotions (especially that surprise ending. It makes the reader aware of how they feel and react to different scenarios and WAY more appreciative.)
God the connection I felt to the characters toward the end, made me want to relate it to parts of my life and just .. The only improvements I could suggest were more descriptive language around their conversations and the way the Characters related to eachother to draw it out more.
Also to perhaps explain the surprise ending; so the readers know at which exact point he began dreaming so we know what was fact or fiction and feel complete after the book ends.
OR add the explanation into an epilogue. Either way, amazing book and needs to be published ASAP!!

Similar Stories : The fault in our stars - but although it connected more it was less depressing so that was a great plus!
OR
The one and only Jack Chant. So similar emotionally.

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FallOutBun on April 19, 2017, 8:50 a.m. said:

FallOutBun


It's perfect, just like its author. I love you @iwearheelys

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Brittany Ingo on April 19, 2017, 6:39 p.m. said:

Brittany Ingo


ah i needed this, i've had a stressful day. thank you, ily :-)

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Katie Jones on April 17, 2017, 2:33 p.m. said:

Katie Jones


When My Shift Ends is an amazing book! It is not only funny and has a great plot line, but it also is very intriguing. You cannot ever stop reading it. I really recommend this book to readers.

Similar Stories : When My Shift Ends is sort of like The Fault In Our Stars but there are many things that make it unique

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mishnathaly on April 16, 2017, 12:50 a.m. said:

mishnathaly


i absolutely love this book. it has a good amount of both sadness and happiness in it.

Similar Stories : i wouldn't compare it to any books because it's completely unique and different from other stories [in a good way].

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Val_h2 on April 15, 2017, 10:47 p.m. said:

Val_h2


It was so amazing it was realistic and it took me on a roller coaster of emotions over all it was beautiful!! I love it!!

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