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Within a Dream Chani Lynn Feener

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Lily likes being a witch. Sure, aside from floating pencils and telepathically communicating with her three best friends, there aren't many real perks. Until it brings two of the hottest guys she's ever seen into her life. Of course, there are always strings, and this one comes in the form of a prophecy foretelling her saving, and eventually ruling, a realm she's never heard about in this lifetime. With dark fey suddenly hunting them down, Lily and her friends are forced to make a decision, complete the prophecy or turn there backs. If that isn't enough stress, Lily also has a choice to make of her own. Trust in their brooding dark haired guide, Larkin? Or the golden dream stalker Ronan? One claims he's her soul mate. Both want her back in a realm she can't recall. What's a girl to do?

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  • 91991 words
  • About 368 pages
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Swoon Index Ranking

  • Heat

    9

  • Tears

    2

  • Laughs

    7

  • Thrills

    8

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67 comments on "Within a Dream"

M. C. Frank on Feb. 4, 2016, 8:34 p.m. said:

M. C. Frank


What do you like so far? Any suggestions on how the writer could improve the story?
I like it so far. Want to continue reading... <3

What popular book or story would you compare it to? None come to mind.

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bogun on Jan. 16, 2016, 10:33 a.m. said:

bogun


It can't be over! I loved how this was written with many plot twists and vague information, you could never really see anything coming. Is there a sequel written yet?

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Chani Lynn Feener on Jan. 17, 2016, 11:10 p.m. said:

Chani Lynn Feener


It's currently in the works! :) I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for taking the time to read and comment, it means a lot!

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A.G.Stone on Jan. 1, 2016, 7:55 p.m. said:

A.G.Stone


I can't think of any ways to improve this. It is absolutely stunningly amazing.

It cannot be compared.

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Chani Lynn Feener on Jan. 2, 2016, 5:23 p.m. said:

Chani Lynn Feener


Thank you! So glad that you liked it! Thanks for taking the time to read!

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A. E. Cummings on Dec. 28, 2015, 11:38 a.m. said:

A. E. Cummings


it was a an absolute pleasure to read that and that was a fabulous ending in my opinion.

i can't think of any.

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Chani Lynn Feener on Jan. 2, 2016, 5:23 p.m. said:

Chani Lynn Feener


Thanks! I'm glad you liked the ending! It's always tough to figure out how to end a book.

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B.S. Todd on Dec. 7, 2015, 8:21 p.m. said:

B.S. Todd


I really liked this story and all the characters. Nicely written.

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Andrea.Heltsley on Nov. 4, 2015, 5:17 p.m. said:

Andrea.Heltsley


This is the first book I have read by author, Tempest C. Avery, and really enjoyed it! Her work is unique and captivating!
The best part of this book? The character development! I adored Lily! I liked how we are slowly introduced to each person until they all have a part in the story.
I also LOVE to read Love Triangles! Yep, this book has one! Both guys are so unique, and I really was curious about one of the guy's identities. Both are swoon-worthy!
Overall, this romantic fantasy was an excellent introduction to the different realms the author has built. I look forward to reading the sequel!
I'm giving this book five glittery stars!

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Andrea.Heltsley on April 18, 2016, 5:41 p.m. said:

Andrea.Heltsley


Also:
I really liked the characters. I'm also a fan of love triangles. The author did a fantastic job of building the romance. Looking forward to reading the next book! The only thing I noticed, was the fact that she was young yet her parents were never really in the picture. They spent a lot of time at her house, so it was a little awkward. But, this author is quickly becoming one of my favorites. As a fellow author, I know what it takes to put together a finished book, and this author has so much potential!
Similar Stories : It's actually pretty original. I read about 300 books each year and can't think of anything to compare it to.

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