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Within a Dream Chani Lynn Feener

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Lily likes being a witch. Sure, aside from floating pencils and telepathically communicating with her three best friends, there aren't many real perks. Until it brings two of the hottest guys she's ever seen into her life. Of course, there are always strings, and this one comes in the form of a prophecy foretelling her saving, and eventually ruling, a realm she's never heard about in this lifetime. With dark fey suddenly hunting them down, Lily and her friends are forced to make a decision, complete the prophecy or turn there backs. If that isn't enough stress, Lily also has a choice to make of her own. Trust in their brooding dark haired guide, Larkin? Or the golden dream stalker Ronan? One claims he's her soul mate. Both want her back in a realm she can't recall. What's a girl to do?

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  • 91991 words
  • About 368 pages
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  • Heat

    9

  • Tears

    2

  • Laughs

    7

  • Thrills

    8

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67 comments on "Within a Dream"

Shaye Bhana on April 5, 2015, 2:56 p.m. said:

Shaye Bhana


I loved this book from start to finish. I thought that Lily was strong and independant but when it came to Larkin... I loved the fact that even though it was based on The Six, the initial 4 friends were tightly knit, disregarding their different backgrounds and "diversities". The twist at the end was heart breaking and even then a few scenes were tear-inducing. Overall, very good and I'd highly recommend this book to witch and prophecy lovers.

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Shaye Bhana on April 6, 2015, 10:52 a.m. said:

Shaye Bhana


Team Ronan or Larkin?
Urgh I'm so conflicted. Larkin is sometimes really sweet, but he's really hot-headed. Ronan is so alluring, so he's kind of the mystery guy. Hmmm... I have to side with the bad boy, I suppose. And in this situation I'll have to go with Ronan.
Team Ronan

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Chani Lynn Feener on May 24, 2015, 4:15 p.m. said:

Chani Lynn Feener


I have to ask myself that question every time I sit down to write about them. Lol.

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SleepinKitten on April 20, 2015, 3:38 a.m. said:

SleepinKitten


I really like Lily and her friends aka "the Six" but if I have to pick a favorite it'd be Bran. He's funny, laid back and the most knowledgeable of the Six I think. I can't wait to read the next book. Lily and Ronan shared some steamy moments but I have to go Team Larkin all the way!!!

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Chani Lynn Feener on May 15, 2015, 10:08 a.m. said:

Chani Lynn Feener


In the first draft (written a million years ago) Bran was super uptight so when I decided to completely scrap that a write a new book with the same characters, I decided he deserved to be more laid back. So glad that carried over! Thanks for reading!!!!

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Karen Einarson on May 14, 2015, 8:20 p.m. said:

Karen Einarson


This was a good read, sorry to have it end... Another cliffhanger, another sequel to wait on. Well worth reading!

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Chani Lynn Feener on May 15, 2015, 10:10 a.m. said:

Chani Lynn Feener


Thanks for reading! Glad you liked it!!! I've got another book on here so if you have the time check it out! :)

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Amber Brownlow on June 8, 2015, 6 a.m. said:

Amber Brownlow


I really enjoyed this story and the characters as well. It was an amazing story that quickly grabbed my attention and kept me guessing until the very end. I can't wait to find out what happens to everyone! Great job-hope to be able to read more of your work in the future.

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amanda on June 10, 2015, 11:54 a.m. said:

amanda


Tempest C. Avery has truly outdone herself this time!! Easily one of the best books I've read in a long time! Within a Dream was absolutely enchanting and I was completely consumed by it. Like with Tempest's other fantastic reads, Unhinged and Beguiling Trickery, I could not put this book down once I started reading it. I immediately found myself falling in love with the characters and found the story extremely fascinating. Between witches, werewolves and fae, what more could one possible ask for in a paranormal novel? Tempest managed to keep the story thrilling from beginning to end. My only disappointment was that it had to come to an end. It left me wanting more so I can't wait for book 2 to come out!!
Easily 5/5 stars. I recommend it to anyone who loves paranormal books filled with suspense and excitement. :)

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Amy on June 18, 2015, 8:36 a.m. said:

Amy


*** I was provided this book for free in return for an honest review ***

I found myself growing increasingly attached to this book and the characters as the story progressed! By the end I was flying through the pages! The story surrounds Lily and her friends as they discover the truth about who they are and where their powers come from. There is a healthy dose of mystery, adventure and romance. As well as some twists! The reader really connects with Lily as she struggles with unknowns... We are right there with her! At first I got a bit lost in the book's repetition of thoughts and description, but this decreased as the book went on, lending to a nice pace and flow. If you like supernatural beings, this book is for you, almost every type of "creature" you can think of had a part in this tale- werwolves, witches, faeries, aliens... You name it! This book built to an exciting conclusion, leaving me excited to read what will happen next!!

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